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Post by Xadik Wed May 27, 2015 10:29 pm

Name: Ren Hitaro




Race: Somebody, Human




Description:
Ren is 5 feet, 10 1/2 inches tall, with long gray hair that has icy blue and black streaks throughout it. Her hair goes down halfway between her shoulders and her waist. She wears something akin to an Assassin's outfit (from Assassin's Creed). The outfit is colored with the same icy blue , gray and black theme as her hair streaks. She usually keeps the hood down, unless she's hunting something. She doesn't use many weapons, with only a pair of pistols on her waist and a bow and quiver on her back.




Primary Elements
1.) Darkness
2.)  Ice
3.)  Metal
4.)  Space





Base Ability: Dawnbreaker - Ren summons a deep darkness that bursts forth around her, briefly stunning (1 post) all nearby (about10 meters) beings with a Heart Element of Light.
Base Ability Cool Down: 5 posts




Tier One
1st Skill: Freezolver : Ren generates six shots of metal encased in ice in a hexagonal pattern around her left wrist. By making a gun with her fingers and "firing" it, she can fire off a shot. The ice then rotates clockwise like an actual revolver until she is out of shots. 2 post cooldown, 1 post to load. She can only fire one shot per post.
2nd Skill: Frost Shot : Ren enchants an arrow as she loads it into her bow. This shot will chill the target, applying a slowing effect that stacks with consecutive hits. Each shot slows the target around 25%. She can only apply up to 5 stacks, the 5th stack freezing a target for their next post and putting frost shot on a 5 post cooldown.
3nd Skill: Iron Maiden : Ren wraps her skin with summoned metal for 1 post. This stuns her and prevents any further action, but reduces all incoming non-fire/non-electric (or anything based on fire/electricity) damage by 75%. Any non-reduced damage is increased by 50% instead. 2 post cooldown, but if Ren uses it twice within 3 posts she'll faint from the stress on her body.
4rd Skill: Bullet Hell : Ren summons small metal balls in multiples of 10. Each ball deals extremely low metal damage, but it adds up quickly. Cooldown is 1 post plus 1 post for every 10 balls summoned.
5th Skill: Cold as Ice: Ren passively is so cold that her blood is just barely liquid enough to move. Upon exposure to air it immediately freezes. This protects Ren from bleeding effects, and slows down the speed of any poison effects, as well as preventing the draining of  her blood. (Passive: Always on)
6th Skill: Siren Song: Ren starts to sing. Anyone who hears it and falls for her voice falls under a trance feels the chilling coldness of her soul. While she cannot freeze any of these targets solid, she can give them pneumonia (after 2 posts of singing if they haven't broken out yet) and hypothermia (after 4 posts if they haven't broken out yet). To break out of the trance the targets have to receive minor physical pain, or undergo mental stress, or become un-enticed by her voice/looks. If she takes any moderate damage, she'll stop immediately, but not enter the fatigue state. If she takes severe damage she'll stop immediately AND enter the fatigue state. She can only do this once per topic, and in doing so she enters a state of fatigue where she can't use any other skills for 10 posts.
7th Skill:  Frozen Platforming - Ren creates a series of ice platforms in the area. They last for a post duration of (1 post per platform summoned) And she can warp between the platforms at will. Cooldown (2 posts per platform summoned)
8th Skill: Blizzard - Simple Ice Magic, deals low ice damage in an area twice as long as her wingspan and twice as high as her head. (1 post cooldown)




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Last edited by Kai Hitaro on Fri May 29, 2015 2:20 pm; edited 8 times in total

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Post by Xadik Thu May 28, 2015 11:49 am

All done. Unusable skill tiers have been hidden in the spoiler tag for clarity purposes.

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Post by Keyblade Warrior Terra Thu May 28, 2015 12:08 pm

-cracks knuckles-
Alright, let's do this.

For "Freezevolver" I need to know how many shots are in that 'chamber' before she has to 'reload': IE, how many shots is she taking before she runs out of 'bullets'

75% is a little much for something you can summon up every other post. You can either increase the cooldown on that, or you can decrease the damage output on it.

How much damage on "Rocket?"
How deep is the Avalanche on....Avalanche, and how much damage would it do?
You can have poison immunity, or bleed immunity, but not both in the same skill. Sorry.

How long does it take for her song to give them hypothermia? How long does it take them to freeze them in place? How long does it take it to give them pneumonia? These are different levels of damage that should probably take more time than the others, (Freezing, pneumonia, and hypothermia, respectively.)
What are the terms that need to be met in order to break from the trance? You don't have to get specific.

I won't touch the others until you get to that tier on your characters, so just address the things mentioned above and you should be good to go.
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Post by Xadik Thu May 28, 2015 12:43 pm

Freezolver has not been changed. It says she generates six shots in a hexagonal pattern as part of the first line of its description. Added a firing limit per post to Freezolver.
Iron Woman has been lowered to 50%, and been given an extra downside.
Rocket has had damage clarified, and Avalanche has had its effects clarified.
Siren Song has been completely clarified in its wording, including how to break out of the trance or stop her from singing it.

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Post by Keyblade Warrior Terra Thu May 28, 2015 1:02 pm

Ah, my mistake on the first. Durr.

Approved. Thank you for your patience.
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Post by Xadik Thu May 28, 2015 1:07 pm

Thank you for yours.

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Post by Xadik Fri May 29, 2015 2:00 pm

If you could please move Ren back. The skill tree she has was meant to compliment Kai's original one. I need to modify it since his wasn't allowed.

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Post by Keyblade Warrior Terra Fri May 29, 2015 2:08 pm

Absolutely. Moving now.
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Post by Xadik Fri May 29, 2015 2:16 pm

Thank you. I've modified the base ability, and three tier 1 abilities. (Specifically, Iron Maiden has been reworded with an additional two downsides and a longer cooldown but given its original defense increase.) Rocket and Avalanche have been replaced with Bullet Hell and Frost Shot.

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Post by Keyblade Warrior Terra Fri May 29, 2015 2:40 pm

Reapproved.

Anything else?
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Post by Xadik Fri May 29, 2015 3:00 pm

Nope, thanks

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