Natural Scope

Ability Name
Natural Scope

Ability Type
Sensory

Ability Cost
5 Mana

Ability Cooldown:
None

Ability Element
Wind / Earth

Ability Description
Sen is able to feel the slightest vibrations either above the ground or below it. He accomplishes this by focusing his powers of manipulation via earth or wind. This allows him to locate and follow any movement within a twenty meter radius of him. Movement location is relayed back to him via elemental waves that travel either through the air or the ground and into his body. Duration is three posts.

This seems more like a Skill, honestly, and it would probably be more beneficial to you if it was in a Skill-Tree.

All abilities need a cost; 5MP for every 3 posts that this ability is active seems fair, its pretty non-offensive.

As your Magic tier rises, you will be able to add onto this ability, as well as make its effects last longer for a single expenditure. Just something for you to be thinking about, really.

Radius cannot be described in non-vague terms, like damage or healing can, tmk. I would recommend something like 10 meters or so, since this is a rather low-cost spell.

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Later on when I reach tier two I will add this to a tree. For now though, Id like it to be available.

With that said, I edited both cost and effective distance.

Also thank you for the welcome and all your help. I really, really appreciate it~

Apologies, I meant that when you spend 5 MP to activate this ability, it should have a duration of 3 posts. My bad.

Add in the duration of 3 posts to the effect and reduce the cost to 5 MP.

My mistake!

Edited.

This seems good to me.

Ready for Approval.

Approved