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Faded Ray

Post by LMS on Mon May 16, 2016 2:03 pm

Name: Faded Ray
Age: 43
Species: Somebody

Primary Elements
1.) Light
2.) Fire
3.) Water
4.) Wind

Personality:
(pirate) Quiet and very much stoic and standoff-ish. Indifferent. Does what's better for him and not anyone else. Dark humor. Unforgiving. Determined. Has a vendetta against those he crosses paths with. Slightly sexist. (only slightly). Very sexualized person. Greedy and prideful. (not too cocky and doesn’t gloat.)
When he drinks he is calmer and content, but still rude. Paranoid.
Likes coin tricks.

Appearance:


History:
(pirate) Became a pirate when his father’s fishing vessel was lost at sea(more like captured by pirates) and he integrated himself into the ranks of the pirates. (13 years old)(now 43)
(worked his way up the ranks between the time of 13 and 23)(ranked first officer)
(at age 23)The pirate ship required a wizard and it was his job to monitor the wizard. (wizard did not come willingly) a year passed and the wizard offered Ray a bargain. If Ray helped him get away from the pirate ship, the wizard would teach him what he knows (magic) and pay Ray a considerable amount. Ray agreed(of course) Next time the ship docked, Ray started a riot. It was a success. He studied eight years under the wizard's care. (32 years old) He left the wizard and went to the port. Waited a year in port for the ship to return. Once again, he snuck his way aboard.
(33 to 38) gained first officer again and caused mutiny against the captain and murders the captain. Renames the ship Faded Ray.
(38 to 43) Sailed his way into Neverland. (...)

Other Notes:
Possibly served under Captain Hook.
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Re: Faded Ray

Post by Faye on Mon May 16, 2016 5:18 pm

The only advice I have is that you make what you've written more narrative rather than a listing. Other than that, everything appears to be in order.

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STR Tier 5 | END Tier 5 | MAG Tier 5 | SPE Tier 5 | AGI Tier 5 | SYNTH Tier 5
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