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Leonardo De Fleur

Post by Lenneth on Wed Jan 28, 2015 2:00 am


Name: Leonardo De Fleur
Age: 107
Species: Somebody (A spirit of light with a heart)

Primary Elements
1.) Light
2.) Plant
3.) Space
4.) Metal

Personality: Leonardo is a men of high standards and upbringing by his noble family, named as war heroes by their ancestors accomplishments. He prides himself dearly to maintain the family’s title and wealth even as their adoptive son. He paints himself always as a composed and strong stature masking the frail humility of his confined heart. One to rarely show weakness he never lets his appearance faultier even under pressure or show much else other then a still frozen expression of intensity. Much to his taste he is one that adores the strength of will and leadership qualities, muscle and magical power mean little if the person behind them are nothing more then puppies, just crawling through life in a tantrum. Leonardo will not hesitate to look down upon those he considers beneath his mercy or one that he finds pollutes the purity of humanities ideals. Leo is Merciless, and cold he will seek out anything to aid his quest but show little kindness to anything standing in his way. 

He greatly dislike weakness of the heart, shyness, uncertainty etc are all flaws he expects others to correct at once. The only thing to that exceeds that hatred would be his dislike of the darkness and those that it calls children or given in to it. While tragic circumstance has slicked him with traits of the dark he seeks not a care but for justice, wiping out the shadows of existence is his own goal in life.

Leonardo however is not without his humanity; he will socialize often to humans and those that he deems worthy. He may be a bit harsh but he will offer guidance for the youth when needed. Above all else he consider self an ideal more then anything, his charm, his well-being mean little under the scoop of his pride. He is deep down a person that does care for others and while he is not known to be kind he does hold sympathy.

Even as a noble Spirit he has kept his high morals strong even while following the king of darkness

Appearance: Leonard was a tall man, standing at a height of 6 foot 5 inches without the aid of shoes he is a stature of grace and power. His natural build is quite sturdy, muscular and built as a strong man whose muscles are lean and pop out very well. Proportion wise he has a good V shaped torso to match his style, narrow waist and hips with broader shoulders while all visible toned and cut. His legs are slightly longer then the rest of him but his mid-section is normal length. He has medium strawberry blond hair that flows freely behind him in a messy untidy style most of the time, when working he does comb and brush his hair down straighter at his sides while just covering the front of his left eye. He looks at people with a deep blue gaze while his lips are thin and soft. His face it fairly handsome, moderate leveled cheek bones and tight lightly tanned skin.

Since becoming a spirit Leonardo has gained much of his human appearance though with powerfully addition granted to him by his world's spiritual higher being upon his original death.  He has gained an additional set of arms to handle his weapons much more easier. He has gained long purple thigh boots to his now corporeal form. His long blond hair is grown past to his back while his features have become more defined and sharper. He has gain more muscle mass when he is solid and visible.

He carries four normal weapons when in combat.

Weapons

Crimson Lunar: A long rapier blade that’s thin yet strong metal allows for quick attacks and pin point accuracy with little wind resistance. It is sharpen at all points, to allow the blade to easily thrust into martial with ease and able to cut quite well if need be.

Black Lunar rite: Several black tint metal daggers that are carried underneath his breast plate he can draw quickly.

Tip of Pain: A Trident dagger that used for parrying blows Leo uses as of offhand weapon to defend with, it is easily able to switch to offence as well when an opening presents itself.  This dagger is poison tipped and will cut flesh with ease.

Black Creast: A large round wide Axe that is heavy at its very top to allow more weighted blows to crush foes and slice them in half with ease.

History: Leonardo De Fleur is a young man born not of this world but taken in at a young age by a wealthy and kind family when he was only a child of 3 years. They pitied all the war orphans of their battles but this one in practically felt different, they were drawn to the crying child and took it under their wing. Growing up with his new found parents Leo had a very simple life style, training alongside his siblings, society customs and upper traditions of the high class. Swords play however often took up the majority of his time, often training with both his mother and father with the blade. While they found him not to be the strongest heir to their title he was certainly one of the fastest soldiers they had encountered both in mind and body. His speed was unmatched in their entire house hold and while he lacked the brutality of assaults like his elder brothers he matched it with piercing accuracy to fine points of each target. This time last for years, Leo spent very little time socializing outside his family and other noble names that graced his home. Aunts and uncles passed by often as well to commitment on their little black sheep and teach him the basics of arcane lore and might though his ability in it was certainly not to more educated minds like his youngest sister. 

He did however often went alongside his family during missions that required travel, taking to the fields of battle to fight against any that would stand against them.

Leonardo earned the title of a Knight at the age of 16, allowing him to leave the confines of home to serve his kingdom and its ideals. As a final parting gift to his welcomed accomplishment his father gave Leo their greatest and most terrible gift, the family’s cursed. This in turn gave the boy supernatural powers beyond that what a common human would ever hope to accomplish on their own, to train and develop his own style of combat while he served, at the price of his end being a gruesome and hellish experience once all was said and done. But that only meant his duty to his title and name to earn the family honor and respect before his monstrous ending came to pass.     

Years passed eventfully and full of his blade’s glory and his masterfully accomplishments, earning him the praise of his leader. However that was all about to change at the age of 19 when the heartless appeared and threaten all of creation, it was rumored that the results of a young hero across the stars quilled such assault but even then their memory of the heartless faded, all but Leo’s. His home would again live in peace without the invaders of a different worlds touching his home for years yet while he grew and became strong. At the age of 23 however another newer event forever changed his life, new memories formed and showed themselves one night as he rested. Pictures and feelings of a great ruler of darkness with the title of “La Vaeas” continuously popping in his head. He could slowly recall a different life that connected to his own somehow, the daily thoughts passed of the heartless prince, the different body he had.

His desires would soon call out to the might heartless king whom he found while out exploring the worlds after his thoughts could no longer be ignored.  Finding the prince of lust the knight became overwhelmed with emotions, so much so they finally were unable to be suppressed and he felt his entire life in that single moment. Lenneth while interested in a man whose powers were a result of the light found the knight's desire overwhelming strong. Testing him time and again to show him the colours of betray but Leo never once questioned his beloved lord and served him without questioned. This came as a welcome changed to the La Vaeas whom had then one accepted Leo as a knight worthy of his court as the corrupted light bringer.  

Years together passed and Leo's family finally came looking for the foolish human who had also survived the wars and choose to explore the worlds in searcher of their lost boy. Under the cover of stealth they would finally best Leo in great numbers and take him away while Lenneth' was absent due to his first death. Under their family's holy magics and rituals they purifiered Leo's entire form in hopes of saving the man's essence for a better future. They  burned his entire body into ash by holy light giving his spirit to their light born creator giving Leo the sacred powers of their family's divine spirit guardian. Alias they were gravely mistaken and Leo's desire proved to be his own. Even in this new form granted the peak of his world's powers the holy knight placed judgment on his family for their arrogance and slaughter them for trying to kill him.  Finding his lost King of darkness once again Lenny felt no hesitation in accepting Leo as one of his chosen despite his new form as a divine spirit of light, plus the form was just sexy too.  Leo once more pledged his entire existence to Lenneth once more swearing that even in his death he would serve the dark king for eternity.


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Re: Leonardo De Fleur

Post by Game Master on Wed Jan 28, 2015 5:41 am

First thing is first: your weapon and armor abilities can not be separate from your skill tree. You will need to either discard those effects or discard other effects in your tree.

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Re: Leonardo De Fleur

Post by Lenneth on Wed Jan 28, 2015 5:50 am

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Re: Leonardo De Fleur

Post by Game Master on Wed Jan 28, 2015 5:57 am

Let me clarify. From the Party Member Info topic

http://miragehearts.forumotion.com/t284-party-members-info

Game Master wrote:The Party Members do not get abilities, weapons, skill trees, summons, or anything else of the like approved. Instead, each party member has their own corresponding skill tree in the application, detailing their functions. A normal weapon such as a sword would already not need to be approved, but unlike Main Characters who have a wide array of vast and unique abilities all the abilities a Party Member is capable of possessing exists in the skill tree portion of the application. This includes abilities tied to item enchantments, physical anomalies, magic or martial abilities, and summons.

Specifically, referring to your magically charmed armor.

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Re: Leonardo De Fleur

Post by Lenneth on Thu Jan 29, 2015 12:42 am

oh

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Re: Leonardo De Fleur

Post by Game Master on Fri Jan 30, 2015 5:50 am

Holy Reckoning needs to have a three post cooldown.

Mirage is a skill of the Illusion Element. Further, for a tier one ability it is attempting to do quite a lot of advanced things- it can either create multiple (no number given) clones or an entire area that will actively conceal you. The latter of those two is very powerful indeed, on top of being two different abilities altogether.

Give me a Cooldown on Sentinel.


For Blood Scent, I want a limit on how many times it can be used per post.

For Light Speed, Stamina is not an attribute. It will also need a cooldown.

You can use Never Easy to create a shield after three hits, or you can use it to give your fourth punch an explosion, but not both.

Rend needs a cooldown.

Badge of Honor needs a limit to how many times it can be used per post and a cooldown.


Phantom Dancer is Illusion.

Passing Judgement can not affect the Magic Stat. Magic is based on knowledge, information, and what a character has learned. It also needs a Cooldown.

Stay the Night needs a stack limit.

Duel needs to specify how many curse stacks it applies. You'll need to place a Cooldown on this spell greater than three posts. A similar ability has a cooldown of twenty, but this is not as extreme as that. Give it a cooldown of ten.

Final Hour has Illusion in it. It also needs a duration, and a longer cooldown.









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Re: Leonardo De Fleur

Post by Lenneth on Fri Jan 30, 2015 6:16 am

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Post by Game Master on Fri Jan 30, 2015 7:21 pm

Give me an exact number on Sentinel and I'll decide on a Cooldown from there.


For Blood Scent, once per post.


Give me an idea of a "Severe Cap" seeing as that is extraordinarily vague. Is the cap itself severely high or is the limit a severe boost?

I'm getting the idea that this camouflage you want is so good it's basically invisibility. I need to know before I can make a judgement.

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Post by Lenneth on Sat Jan 31, 2015 12:06 am

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and I was just thinking like very high boost from his nomarl since its level of usefulness depends on how many hits he got in and how non-cured the foes are

and not really while in my head i considered illusion the only abiltiy to make totally invisabiltiy i was thinking camo where like you still see his outline if he moves too much or like he bends into the backround like a chamlooon but if seen close enough you can tell the difference

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Post by Game Master on Sat Jan 31, 2015 2:30 pm

After discussing it with staff, this is what we have ruled on using light to create active camouflage/invisibility.

Leonardo will be capable of creating/maintaining a cloak around his body that renders him with the above effects. However, the following stipulations are being implemented as precedents:

Bending light like this renders Leonardo blind. As long as nobody can see him, he would not be able to see them either. Upon moving, Leonardo would regain some semblance of sight because the camo was broken, enabling him to be somewhat visible. You will not be able to use this to conceal non-visual indicators of your presence such as magical signature, sound, or scent. If you enter an area of darkness, shadow, or shade, you will no longer be invisible.

I would suggest using plant to justify the active camouflage since, while not as great, the drawbacks would be decidedly less severe.

Sentinel needs a seven post cooldown.

Given that it's a tier two skill, I'm going to force Rend to to limit the max to a severe boost as well as stat how many hits it would take to get there, as well as specify how heavily damaged they'd need to be.

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Re: Leonardo De Fleur

Post by Lenneth on Wed Feb 11, 2015 10:28 pm

removed all camo effects

change "Mirage" ability to phase

Final hour buffed powers to compensate for lost of component

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