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MH Academy: A Kingdom Hearts AU :: Character Creation :: Party Members :: Approved P.M. Applications
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Aspect of Redemption
by Seth Vicens Mon Jun 01, 2015 5:58 am
Name: Aspect of Redemption
Age: ???
Species: Somebody
Primary Elements
1.) Light
2.) Time
3.) Wind
4.) Fire
Personality: The AoR is one of Seth’s Aspects, and as such, shares many personality traits with him. He is quite a solemn individual.
Appearance: The Aspect of Redemption appears as a corrupted young man, infected by the same crystals from which Seth was granted his own powers. His arm is formed into a bow, which launches arrows formed of Light.
History: A being born of a flash of light and crystal. Emerging from the sword of Seth’s Heart, this figure exists in a state of limbo, only able to come forth in times of Seth’s need. This being represents Seth’s quest for Redemption for his failures of past, present and future. A remnant of a past life living on and existing within Seth’s soul, the Aspect of Redemption is more than willing to fight for what it once and still believes in.
Age: ???
Species: Somebody
Primary Elements
1.) Light
2.) Time
3.) Wind
4.) Fire
Personality: The AoR is one of Seth’s Aspects, and as such, shares many personality traits with him. He is quite a solemn individual.
Appearance: The Aspect of Redemption appears as a corrupted young man, infected by the same crystals from which Seth was granted his own powers. His arm is formed into a bow, which launches arrows formed of Light.
History: A being born of a flash of light and crystal. Emerging from the sword of Seth’s Heart, this figure exists in a state of limbo, only able to come forth in times of Seth’s need. This being represents Seth’s quest for Redemption for his failures of past, present and future. A remnant of a past life living on and existing within Seth’s soul, the Aspect of Redemption is more than willing to fight for what it once and still believes in.
Last edited by Seth Vicens on Fri Jun 05, 2015 3:57 am; edited 2 times in total
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Re: Aspect of Redemption
by Keyblade Warrior Terra Wed Jun 03, 2015 10:15 pm
Tailwinds: Needs a limitation on flight. How fast is it? How high can they go? How long does it last?
Like the Wind: How much is the speed increased by?
The Long Game: Needs a specific length. What's the maximum amount of distance an ally can track someone marked by this?
Hail of Flame: Is that medium damage for each arrow, or is it the total damage?
Don't Blink: What's the range on this ability?
Caretaker: How much is that healing weakened by per ally?
Eagle Eye: *Definitely* needs a cooldown.
Skilled Shot: How much damage is dealt based on the distance? (IE: if I'm "X" feet away, how much damage would I take compared to "Y" feet?)
That's all I have to address. Just tidy those up and you're good to go.
Like the Wind: How much is the speed increased by?
The Long Game: Needs a specific length. What's the maximum amount of distance an ally can track someone marked by this?
Hail of Flame: Is that medium damage for each arrow, or is it the total damage?
Don't Blink: What's the range on this ability?
Caretaker: How much is that healing weakened by per ally?
Eagle Eye: *Definitely* needs a cooldown.
Skilled Shot: How much damage is dealt based on the distance? (IE: if I'm "X" feet away, how much damage would I take compared to "Y" feet?)
That's all I have to address. Just tidy those up and you're good to go.
Keyblade Warrior Terra- Keyblade's Chosen
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Keyblade Warrior Terra- Keyblade's Chosen
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Re: Aspect of Redemption
by Guest Thu Jun 04, 2015 11:11 pm
Character and Tree must be split to follow new rules and guidelines.
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