Umbran Apex

Ability Name: ( Umbran Apex )
Ability Type: (Offensive)
Ability Cost: (175 mp)
Ability Cooldown: (6 posts)
Ability Element: (Darkness/Time)
Ability Description: ( Lenneth creates a very quick powerful gathering paroxysm of Darkness in a single point in any area in a massive space of his location. After it erupts into an outward blast of darkness pushing away anything caught it its radius to a very huge meter distance away while delivering very high levels of darkness damage and cursing them which reduce their defence, elemental and magically defence by High amount. The blast sphere is Massive in circumference maximum then receding back into that single point after it fully expands; Lenenth is able to alter the size if the case calls for it, After the shock wave subsides the energies still linger over the area cause moderate dark damage to those the enter the area each post till it dissipates for 7 post in that impact site. Further this deals additional magical damage based on a of their  Agi or speed stat which over is higher, lowering their movements further to this after effect.  )

Okay, so, I assume the range is pretty much line-of-sight?

The initial effect is just an explosion you control. Which is fine.

However, the... "Miasma", for want of a better word, that this spell leaves behind, I'm not sure it should be doing direct damage to their health. However, if, while in the miasma, persons take penalties to certain stats, that'd be fine.

Also, that cooldown needs to be AT LEAST 8. Otherwise, you could just stack this, and render people utterly useless.

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Let's just be totally clear, since the language is a bit confusing.

The miasma does DoT Darkness, and Endurance DoT.

Yes?

The endurance damage comes from the inthal burst and the miasma damages hurts them afterwards. But yes

could i target a different stat for the bouns damage? so endurance isn't target? goal of this spell was to be more effective against higher tier characters while being less effective to lower teir ones

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making time sensible by slowly them down

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